'things' - ?? surely you can think of a better way to describe your items ? in the first few lines you described them as 'things' no less than 4 times ? If I wanted to buy that would put me off immediately ! What about 'works of art', 'handmade items' 'exclusive designs' etc. etc., anything but THINGS !! things could be anything !!!
'things' - ?? surely you can think of a better way to describe your items ? in the first few lines you described them as 'things' no less than 4 times ? If I wanted to buy that would put me off immediately !
ReplyDeleteWhat about 'works of art', 'handmade items' 'exclusive designs' etc. etc., anything but THINGS !! things could be anything !!!